This is my Story about Atlantis and I worked really hard on this and I hope you
enjoy this story.
Once upon a time there were two adventures named Scarlett and Evelyn and
they were on an adventure to find the lost Atlantis. They were in the middle of
the adventure when suddenly they were attacked by a monster, as Big as a
Giant. They fought the monster and they won. They carried on their journey.
Scarlett said, “I think we're almost there”. Then Evelyn said, “this is not Atlantis' .
The two cousins were confused. “Maybe we took a wrong turn,” said Evelyn.
“No we didn't,” said Scarlett. “Well where are we then? '' said Evelyn. “I do not
know,” said Scarlett. She winked at Evelyn, then a huge monster squid came
out of the ice. “Password,” it said. “Boxing squid,” both Scarlett and Evelyn said.The monster let them pass. They carried on through the snow and they took the
road to the jungle and crossed an Alligator pond on a vine. They found a
campsite and settled down and soon went to sleep. They were ready to find
the lost Atlantis. They carried on their journey and they climbed a stone.
Finally Scarlett said, ``we're going up the steps to the lost Atlantis.” But a huge
hairy monster came out of the stairs. They shout,” run”! They run away from the
monster, they are safe at last. Scarlett said, “hah I thought that you had the
map.” “Me, but you were the one who got us in this whole mess”. “All right if we
want Atlantis we need to make a plan” said Scarlett. They whispered to each
other. “Right let's do it”. They run past the monster Scarlett runs Evelyn runs in
circles. Scarlett yells, “ready?” “Ready,” said Evelyn. Scarlett jumps, Evelyn
runs. The lost Atlantis is retrieved. Hooray the cousins go home.
THE END
Hi Evelyn, This is an awesome story. I could really picture you and Scarlett doing this. I wonder what your next adventure might be? Maybe you could write a book about lots of different adventures that you and Scarlett could go on. I love the drawing you have done with your story. Keep up the fantastic work.Ka Pai.
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